Rock idea

Yes the riff is good , very good I like it , the first riff - not sure the second parts fits so much. Maybe do the first riff up a fourth for a second part . But what do I know
Its your song, Id say it is a keeper.
 
Sure it's groovy enough, although I don't like the djenty element of the tone. Needs more color, sounds awful grey.
 
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