Check out my first song! (metal content)

[farrakon]

My first song recorded with ma computerz and axe fx ii.



Tell me what ya thinkz!

 

[Cobrango]

I think that the song could need some more variation. The riffs are cool and all. It's good.

 

[Funeral]

Sounds good. There doesn't seem to be any up and down. Not knocking your writing style, but I tend to have more of a roller coaster ride in my tunes. Make it go somewhere.
Does sound brutal though.

 

[Cobrango]

Rollercoaster, that was what I meant too. yep, bruuutalz!

 

[guitarzpt]

Are you multitracking and panning?
The guitars sound too in the middle to me.

 

[farrakon]

Thanx guys! I understand the roller coaster thing. This track is my first full thing recorded so in my next tracks Ill be more elaborate. I kinda did this between last night and today so not much work into it. Will do on the next . I didnt double track, just duplicated original guitar track and panned them. Will do the real double tracking next time.

 

[InsideOut]

Sounds very angry... I likey The name is the best part :lol