I'm with Cobrango on this one.
Don't get me wrong, your technique is hugely impressive and you've got an incredible array of really -really- good licks, but they're all so jammed together that everything is just lost in a sea of notes. Look at any great shredder, be it Satch, Vai, Gilbert, Timmons, Govan etc... No matter if they're improvising or not they always leave you with more to remember them by then just the fact that they played a lot of notes.
I guess the question is... What's the intention? If it's for fun, or just to show off your chops then it doesn't really matter, but if it's something you want other people to listen to and enjoy then you need to find a way to make your playing a little more engaging,
Beyond that... Not totally sure I dig the tone. It's not bad but it kind of sounds like a thin version of Vai's tone. It cuts really nicely but to my ears it needs more body.