Maybe this is just the speakers which I am currently listening right now, but there seems to be a little bit of compressor pumping when there is a drum hit that coincides with a guitar chug, causing the guitars to sounds a bit soft on the palm mutes. So, I think the recommendations to slightly back of the gain and slightly adjust your EQ are spot on, but also check any plugins you are using on the mix and master. Overall, I thought you got very, very close. You're in the ballpark, even in the infield, and some slight tweaks will get you to home plate! FWIW, this is still closer than I have been able to manage.