Hey Genghis, I thought between 01-2:07 the proximity of the mic was too set back but at 2:07 whatever you adjusted brought out the guitar much better. Tough call but I liked the sound after 2:07 as far as 'live in a room', but maybe playing with the mic a little might beef up those earlier passages. One other thought is that without any other instruments playing it's too hard to tell how this might mix without additional micing. Can you believe I used to have a Panasonic for voice recording tape player in the 70's and would sit it smack in the middle of everything and record jam sessions and think they were the cats meow.