New song sketch

[VeryBadMan]

I've been having fun with the SD2 Metal Foundry pack and recorded a new song idea . no mixing mastering n all that as you can probably tell I am just starting to learn how to record.
I am planning to buy a Bass guitar so I can add that to the mix later.





feedback would be appreciated , forgive the rough edges just a sketch.
Used a Kostein Mark IV patch , thanks Kostein ! your patches are Brootalz !

VBM \m/

 

[Kamaleon]

needs few things, on the drums, change the velocity on the snare and toms so theres softer and harder hits also humanise the timing so its not so quantized

on the guitar try and do a riff twice pan one to the left and one to the right

 

[VeryBadMan]

Great ideas and advise I'm working on it now . Also working on a B) section and a solo ... this is NOT easy .
thanks
cheers .