My latest song completed-Whaddaya think?

[guittarzzan]

I finally finished this one and will be pitching it to Bon Jovi as well as a male country artist, when I figure out who that will be. All the electric guitars are Axefx direct into PT. I'm not super happy with the mix because there's some pretty cool complementary guitar parts going on that groove with the verses and choruses, but until I have it remixed, I'll have to live with it.
Please tell me what you think of the song itself and of the mix (ie vox level in relation to guitars etc).

Thanks guys,
Steve
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7578533

 

[TBurst Std]

Liked the song quite a bit.
Good job!

 

[blakemcginnis]

Great job, sounds radio ready to me!

 

[Scott Peterson]

Solid man, solid.

Well done.

 

[guittarzzan]

Thanks for listening and for the feedback guys.

cheers,
Steve

 

[juliancs]

Awesome. I wish I could write songs. I can really see Bon Jovi singing this - his high snarl (for lack of a better word) singing this. Black and white shots with him on the train and such ! Brilliant.

 

[Shaloha]

Great song!...first thing that hits me regarding your question though is that the Vox are way too hot in the mix...not sitting in comfortably...lower the Vox, or bring the rest of the band up...I'll listen a bit more later...

 

[BlueLotus]

Great song. Love the lyrics. The Melody really compliments them.