Hey Amin, I might have provided similar feedback to you before... While your technique is great, I think there's a marked absence of flow in what you're playing here. To me it just sounds like hopping from one trick to the next. It's like watching a magic show versus being immersed in a magic world. While Petrucci's solos are also heavily focused on technique, I think one of the biggest reasons he's made such an indelible mark on progressive guitar playing is because his solos flow. (Sadly, I think as time goes on, his flow has worsened. I still think his tone and player were better in the earlier years. I digress...)
My recommendation would be to immediately STOP working on technique (your technique is already good enough!!!) and STOP composing solos (this is a crutch). Instead, allocate that time to practicing improvising and phrasing. Just my two cents...