im back with cab pack13 (prog metal track this time)

[Tonewicker]

i made this song while messing around some simple ideas, it turned out a full song idea and my friend wrote the vocals and performed so it turned out a complete song when i least expected.
im not satisfied %100 about musicality on this song actually but well i can do something better next time
i will be grateful if you guys tell me what you think about it
btw all bass guitars are coming from axe fx so i can talk about any of the presets if you interested

 

[Marrafat]

You have some great riffs going lately and this is another. Vocals need some attention to tuning but I can't fault the rest.

 

[Tonewicker]

You have some great riffs going lately and this is another. Vocals need some attention to tuning but I can't fault the rest.

thanks yeah i noticed the thing with the vocals too and tried to fix it but couldnt for some reason.