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Hyper Planet - Beyond The Laniakea (NEW SONG!!!!), A progressive metal band from Tehran-Iran

Hyper Planet

Power User
Hey folks!, This is our first music video off of our debut album!, we used Axe-Fx II for all the guitar and bass tones +@mlsoundlab IRS
we would be happy to have your input about it :)


This song has gained two successions as a semi-finalist in two international songwriting competitions!

1- The Six Dimensions music video competition, based in UK

2- “Unsigned Only” songwriting competition from the USA

 
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Marrafat

Experienced
After listening again I would like to make some suggestions.
At about 5:30 it seems like a new tune has started and it may be better to do that.
Similar to Periphery for example, it might be better to maintain the "groove" rather more throughout the tune.

These are not criticisms, I'm just trying to help.
 
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Hyper Planet

Power User
After listening again I would like to make some suggestions.
At about 5:30 it seems like a new tune has started and it may be better to do that.
Similar to Periphery for example, it might be better to maintain the "groove" rather more throughout the tune.

These are not criticisms, I'm just trying to help.
Thanks for your attention!, The song journey needs to carry you to the different places and discover many room, and the good new is that we have license to that things but in progressive metal fashion ONLY! ;)
 
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