First Recording - Advise Welcome

[CenturyStanding681]

Hey Everyone,

This is my first recorded tone test with the Axe-FX II. Everything was recorded through it, direct into my interface, except for the drums. Pardon the sloppy playing and cheesy improv.

What do you think about the recording? The tones? The mix? I'm a recording newbie, so any and all advise is welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/jimmyjacks-band-of-jams/hillbilly-riffage

 

[simeon]

record the rhythm part again and pan that part hard left and pan the original rhythm part hard right

 

[CenturyStanding681]

It's funny because there is a second rhythm part in there, clearly audible on the monitors, but once it gets bounced and converted to MP3 it's nonexistant. Fiddled with the panning and think I got a much better stereo effect now. Thanks for the feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/jimmyjacks-band-of-jams/hillbilly-riffage-remix

 

[paranoid]

pretty good for first recording IMO I think I would bring the lead up front some more, maybe a little intro to start things off.