Hey Ken,
What pickups are in that Strat? Love the tone.
1. Immediately really liked both songs.
2. I would LOVE to hear those same songs with the rhythm guitar double tracked and panned off center L-R
3. Your drummer should always wear those sunglasses that appear from time to time in the first video. Big, badass dude who can crush it on a minimal kit... very cool vibe.
Karma
It's Seymour Duncan Classic Stack in neck and mid, and a Hot Rail (SHR-1) in the bridge
Now that's Rock n' Roll... Outstanding!! I second the motion to drop the 'f' bomb though,... keeping it "PG" for a wider audience acceptance = greater sales.
thought both tunes sounded great. great playing and tones all around. singer can really sing, nice job.
my only, very small gripe, is the f bomb in the chorus of the first song. not because i find it offensive, it just seemed out of place to me. sometimes the vibe of a song calls for it, but it was distracting to me.
again, not because it was offensive, i listen to offensive music all the time, lol...
I was also going to say this but didn't cause I thought I would just sound old ;-)
That was the ONLY thing I would change in that song.
It sounded forced or "out of place" like jlynnb1 said.
So I would drop it as well.
FWIW, I had this song in my head all day yesterday. And I didn't mind in the slightest!