I've been struggling with this one for a bit... I'm having a hard time figuring out if I should keep it, change it or scrap it altogether. It may be one of those tunes that the vocals make it or break it but I'd like honest opinions of the structure and vibe of the song. Keep in mind this is the bare bones parts and mix. I either hate the bridge or think it's mediocre at best. That would be the first thing I think I'd change if I do decide to keep this song around.
(rough, rough, rough tones and mix)
VERSION 2 (new bridge)