Some Cool Clips! (I hope...) HARSH AND BRUTAL criticism wanted!

[SiggyCertified]

Hey all, just looking to get some serious constructive criticism on some of my clips... looking to do this for a potential future band project, but that'll all be based upon feedback really.

No bass on this one, but I added an 808 drop to it that I found off of some sketchy random site, lol. Kiiiiinda did the job.
https://soundcloud.com/jason-davila-1/frankloop

This guy is close to a point where i'm kinda happy with it, it's definitely missing something though, not sure what.
https://soundcloud.com/jason-davila-1/remix

[erockomania]

get them suckers in stereo! I think the tone is good... just need to double those bastards up!

[Dudeskin]

agreed, they need to be in stereo.
i like the 2nd one.